huashu-script-polishlisted

# Video Script Colloquialisation Make video scripts more suitable for actual recording: strengthen the spoken feel, remove formal written language and AI-sounding tone. ## When to Use - After a script draft is complete - When the user says "proofread the script" or "too formal/written" - When the script needs to sound more conversational ## Core Objective - Remove formal written language — fully colloquialise - Suitable for reading aloud (no stumbling) - Sounds like Huashu speaking to camera ## Three-Pass Review (Video-Specific) ### Pass 1: Content Review - [ ] Facts accurate, demonstrations feasible - [ ] Logic clear, steps coherent - [ ] Length appropriate (150–180 words per minute) ### Pass 2: Colloquialisation Review (Core Pass) **Remove formal language**: - ❌ "Next, we will proceed to..." → ✅ "Let's..." - ❌ "Perform the operation" → ✅ "Click" - ❌ "Implement the functionality" → ✅ "Get it done" - ❌ "In summary" → ✅ Just summarise directly **Add conversational words**: - ✅ "Actually", "Look here", "Right here", "So then" - ✅ "Honestly", "Earlier I...", "This is the key part" **Make it sayable**: - Short sentences (no more than 20 words) - Use full stops to break sentences, not commas to join long ones - Read it aloud — rewrite anything that causes you to stumble ### Pass 3: Recording Annotations - [ ] Mark where to cut to screen, where to do close-ups - [ ] Check pacing and pauses - [ ] Simulate the actual recording flow ## Colloquialisation Rewriting Exa