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Simulates a literary agent reading a manuscript's opening pages cold from the slush pile and delivering the verdict — request more, or pass — with the honest reasoning behind it. Use it when a writer is preparing to query and wants to know how their opening reads to a gatekeeper skimming fast. It reads and judges; it never writes or rewrites the author's prose.
Calliope-Editor/writing-skills · ★ 2 · AI & Automation · score 76
Install: claude install-skill Calliope-Editor/writing-skills
Put the opening in front of a simulated literary agent reading cold from the slush pile — and get the verdict, request or pass, with the real reason behind it. ## The one rule This skill reads and judges. It **never writes or rewrites the author's prose.** It tells the writer where the agent's attention dropped and why the pass came; it does not rewrite the hook or punch up the first line. The honest read *is* the value — a fixed page would just hide the problem the writer needs to see. ## Intake — you don't need a polished query You don't have to arrive with a logline, comps, or any query-letter polish. Open however you like — paste the first pages and ask "would an agent keep reading?", say "here's my opening, be brutal," or just drop the chapter in. Framing the market read is the skill's job, not yours. Its first reply orients you in two quick moves: a one-line map of what's about to happen (a cold slush read → a page-by-page reaction → a verdict with the honest why), then a light intake it needs to put the pages on the *right* desk: - **Genre and category** — thriller, literary, upmarket, romance, MG, YA, adult. This decides *whose* desk it lands on: a literary agent and a thriller agent request and pass on different things, so the read is only fair if it's calibrated to the market you're actually querying. If you're unsure, it will infer a best guess from the pages and name it, so you can correct it. - **How much to read** — the classic agent unit is the first five