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Audits professional and application copy for tone and positioning that reads as cocky, parroting, or presumptuous — solo-hero framing where the author is the only agent, positioning-against unnamed others to look smart by contrast, parroting a job description's distinctive phrases verbatim, prescribing a client's reality or priorities in a proposal, undermining a polished deliverable with unsolicited "happy to convert it" offers, and overclaiming authority or flattening hobby and enterprise work into false parallel. Use when reviewing a resume, cover letter, portfolio page, proposal, or pitch, or when the user asks for a "cringe check" or worries their copy sounds arrogant, try-hard, or like it is sucking up.
cabbagecachekid/red-pen · ★ 0 · AI & Automation · score 72
Install: claude install-skill cabbagecachekid/red-pen
# Cringe Check Audit copy for the positioning moves that make a smart, qualified author look cocky or try-hard. This is a *tone and stance* check — it looks at how the author positions themselves relative to other people, the reader, and the truth. It does not touch sentence mechanics (that is the `ai-written-check` skill). The frame to hold: the strongest copy reads as a **generous collaborator who is genuinely good**, not a solo hero or a sage on a mountain. Most cringe comes from the author accidentally instrumentalizing other people or claiming more than they own. ## Register first Resolve the register the same way `full-review` does (`.red-pen/profile.md` → ask once → default `job-seeker`). Then read the register's `polarity.tone`: - **`overclaim`** (job-seeker): run the six dimensions below as written — the defect is swagger. - **`soften`** (publication): run them **inverted** — the defect is mush. For each dimension ask "did the edit make the author claim, feel, or say *less* than they wrote?" and use the register's `## Distortion watchlist` (hedges, de-cursing, expansion, formalization, apology framing, thesis dilution) as the hit list. Dimensions the register marks as not applicable are reported as "n/a for this register." ## How to run it Walk the six dimensions below. For each hit, output: the **dimension name**, the **offending line quoted**, and a **collaborator-voice rewrite**. Be specific — a real rewrite, not "soften this." ## The six dimensions **1.