email-hookslisted
Install: claude install-skill yaxeen/storytelling-skills
# Email Hooks
- Email has two hooks before any content is read: the **subject line** (earns the open) and the **first line** (earns the read).
- The inbox is a feed — the subject competes with dozens of others in a half-second scan.
- Built on the six levers — see **storytelling-hooks**. Recap: 1. Curiosity gap · 2. Emotional mirror · 3. Conflict engine · 4. Relatability · 5. Pattern + surprise · 6. Three-act.
## When to Use
- Writing a subject line, preview text, or email opener.
- Newsletters, broadcasts, sequences, cold/warm outreach, launches.
- Diagnosing low open rate (subject problem) or low click rate (body/CTA problem).
- Any niche or business.
## The Inbox Stack (Quick Reference)
| Element | Job | Lever focus |
|---------|-----|-------------|
| Subject line | Earn the open | 1, 4, 5 |
| Preview text | Extend the gap (don't repeat subject) | 1, 2 |
| First line | Earn the read, open a loop | 1, 4 |
| Body | Build tension → deliver value | 3, 6 |
| CTA | One action | 1 |
## Subject Line Formulas
- **Curiosity gap:** "The mistake hiding in your [thing]."
- **Specificity:** "How I [result] with [oddly specific detail]." Concrete > vague.
- **Stakes:** "Don't [common action] until you read this."
- **Pattern break:** "Forget [common advice]."
- **Question that's 'about me':** "Is your [thing] secretly [problem]?"
- Rules:
- Short — front-load the hook word. Visible length varies by client (~35–45 chars on mobile, ~70 on desktop); make the hook land inside the fi